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« on: May 21, 2005, 05:16:15 PM » |
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Post The Lost Odyssey comments here please as I will post follow up page in the same thread,
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« Reply #1 on: May 21, 2005, 09:39:46 PM » |
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Great start. I liked the perspective from a new character. You have a long way to go before you are finished. 20 Chapters at least.
Jim
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« Reply #2 on: May 21, 2005, 11:07:17 PM » |
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I will try to look back over it this week Taranis.............my schedule has been crazy these last few days  |
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« Reply #3 on: May 22, 2005, 11:56:24 AM » |
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Thanks I have a nuber of Chapters done .. I will post more |
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« Reply #4 on: May 23, 2005, 03:21:46 AM » |
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Taranis.......
I got a chance to read the five pages........I liked how you captured some of my favorite characters...........especially our own Cassie! The way you wrote about them was good and captured their essance..........I liked it a lot.......i think it is an interesting start.....I liked the character you created!
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« Reply #5 on: May 23, 2005, 08:14:54 AM » |
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Thanks Julix .. I have a number of chapters done. I had planed on telling the first histroy of the flight from Kobol to the colonies and the later meeting with the Cylons ETC along side the adventures of the ragtag fleet. I hope to get back to it soon.  |
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« Reply #6 on: May 23, 2005, 08:45:33 PM » |
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sounds great........I would love to hear that side of the story!! Great idea |
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« Reply #7 on: May 29, 2005, 12:40:21 PM » |
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What made you decide to go into the colonial history? Is history a favorite subject?
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« Reply #8 on: May 29, 2005, 06:01:17 PM » |
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Histroy has long been a intrest for me. from the Romans to the Greeks etc but I also wanted to add someting of my own to the saga. |
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« Reply #9 on: May 30, 2005, 12:32:45 AM » |
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Histroy has long been a intrest for me. from the Romans to the Greeks etc but I also wanted to add someting of my own to the saga. Very good idea, I love it too. what is that quote? Those who don't learn from history are doomed to repeat it. |
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« Reply #10 on: May 30, 2005, 02:07:54 AM » |
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« Reply #11 on: May 30, 2005, 09:12:53 AM » |
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I like that quote. My particuler intrest is Julius Caesar and his life. Alexander the Great also I find intresting.
The main character I am developing for the Kobol story is forebare of Adama
family and deals with the last 30 or 40 years of kobols life. what happened to to cause them to leave and the jounery from kobol to the colonies and settling there.
In some ways I think BSG is like the stories of the people who left Europe to the America's. .
If you want me to post more chapters just shot I have a number of others .
I really need the feed back .
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« Reply #12 on: May 30, 2005, 12:51:11 PM » |
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Of course i want you to post more of your work........you have to ask? :wink: Yes, please do Those are all very interesting subjects, and I like your idea |
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« Reply #13 on: June 02, 2005, 03:17:37 AM » |
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Taranis I am up to page 12 and I like it........very interesting, I thought it got better as I was reading, you really found a good flow of your ideas. As you were talking about Kobal and taking excepts from Adama's journal. I will try to finish the rest of the pages tommorrow Very good.........  |
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« Reply #14 on: June 02, 2005, 08:15:08 AM » |
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Thanks Julix I have just relised that I have posted the older working of the story :oops: and not the latest :oops:
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